01/05/02 - 19:52:06
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i just rerad it on the site and it's okay, a bit "wordy" and a few grammatical errors but...what the hell. i feel horrible and awaiting this Tuesday morning visit to end this surgery format.|
I will amend it before then, the basic content seemed to be a great storyline but can't keep an attention span to adequately serve the purpose. i apologize for my ignorance but, better than not posting it at all.
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